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Voice
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Your character does
not come through in this writing. This character is
largely based on cliché and indistinguishable
from stereotype.
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Your character is recognizable
and mostly believable. Parts of the character are unclear
or indistinguishable from yourself.
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Your character is recognizable,
fairly unique, and believable. The character is reasonably
free of cliché, and will be clear when performed.
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Loud and clear! Your
character is recognizable, unique, and believable. Great
effort was put in to turning a name on paper into a
real person.
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Detail
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This biography is lacking
in unique or relevant details. There is little evidence
that you have used the script, and this paper shows
low knowledge of your character.
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This biography has
some unique and relevant details, but the character's
background has obvious gaps. The script and your imagination
were used, but not to their fullest potential.
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This biography has
several unique and relevant details. Your character
has a firm background, with fair use of script and imagination.
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This biography is jam-packed
with unique and relevant details. Your character is
a solid, three-dimensional person with a firm background
in the script and your imagination.
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Creativity and Flow
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Your writing is choppy
and inconsistent. There is little evidence of logical
progression, and ties to your character are often irrelevant.
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Your writing is fairly
consistent, and there seems to be a logical, if not
always clear, progression in your thoughts. There are
some connections to your character, but they are mainly
superficial.
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Your writing is smooth
and controlled, but lacks variation. There is a clear
progression in your thoughts, and there are strong connections
to your character.
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You have taken risks
to enhance the quality and flow of your writing. Your
biography shows a clear and logical progression, with
strong connections to your character.
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Mechanics
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There are many spelling
and grammatical errors, or there are a few very obvious
and distracting errors. You rarely use descriptive language
well.
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There are some spelling
and grammatical errors, but they are generally not distracting
to the reader. You sometimes use descriptive language
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There are few spelling
and grammatical errors. You are generally quite descriptive
in your writing.
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There are no spelling
or grammatical errors. Your use of language is often
elegant, and always descriptive!
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Assessment (Teacher
Section)
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The writer has not
(1) assessed, or (2) edited his or her work, or has
done neither.
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The writer has partially
assessed and edited his or her work.
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The writer has fully
assessed, but only partially edited his or her work.
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The writer has fully
assessed and edited his or her work.
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